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'Lil Black Dress by ~wrybread:iconwrybread:

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Da 'lil black dress
I must confess
Left my mind in such a mess
Levelord started it one afternoon
Followed up by SFToon
And even after those two call it a day
Every other Dev had to have their say
Draw a pic
Write a fic
as Ron would say
"It's wrong and sick"
But Wrybread decided to waste his time
By writing just the 'lil rhyme
And so my readers will decide
If they should praise or deride
Is it good, or is it crap?
Should I keep it, or send it to Scrap?
By way of ending, I know it sounds lame
as K.P. would say, Keep your head in the game
©2006-2009 ~wrybread
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I had to join the Little Black Dress craze.

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~MidMaddawg2 Jan 26, 2006, 5:18:57 AM
lol, I don't know what to say. I guess I'll decide to praise, it is good, and you should keep it. Also, I'm probably the only one who actually written a story about Kim in a Little Black Dress or LBD as some may say. Mind you, the LBD pics are nothing to shun. Kim has a great body, I've been saying it for years and I would much rather these people draw one pic of her in a sexy Little Black Dress, rather than some other pics I've seen people get their messed up minds making. All in all, short and and to the point. I like it. :pepsi:

--
Ninja: "Its impossible."

Kim: "No... but real close."

-Kim Possible
:icong-go:
~G-Go Jan 26, 2006, 9:18:08 PM
:clap: Nice little bit of thryimg, my friend... and quite silly.

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The Winter Olympics in Torino, Italy begin February 10'th.
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~JuPMod Feb 4, 2006, 5:02:58 PM
:lol: Pretty much how I feel. Just perfect! :) :thumbsup:

--
Kim: We are such lucky ducks.
Ron: No, they are. (Points to ducks)
ducks: Quack! Quack! Quack!
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Kim Possible: The University Years fanfic series
[link]
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~wrybread Feb 5, 2006, 3:20:32 AM
a fav? I'm honored; it took all of five minutes to write

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Once a Queen or King in Narnia, always a Queen or King in Narnia--even Kim & Ron
[link]
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~JuPMod Feb 5, 2006, 6:53:12 AM
It's funny, and I like it, so it's easy for me to say I should fav it. If others get to read it through my 'favorites list', the better. :)

--
Kim: We are such lucky ducks.
Ron: No, they are. (Points to ducks)
ducks: Quack! Quack! Quack!
-------------------------------------------
Kim Possible: The University Years fanfic series
[link]
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~AnimeGem Dec 26, 2007, 2:11:11 AM
omg i love it, u totally have 2 do more of those, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeease,(puppy dog pout)
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~wrybread Dec 27, 2007, 1:25:19 PM
we shall see
I am at the mercy of the plot bunny--or muse--or whatever
it's doggerel
it came into my head in the predawn hours before my morning commute

--
"the Dr. James Timothy Possible of the K.P. Crew 2"

Hail the Lion of Judah & the Lion of Narnia
my brush is my pen
my pallette of colors are words
I wield them as best I can
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Mood: Joy ~KIGOsuperfan999 Aug 20, 2009, 5:58:01 AM
Very nice I like it.The rhyming is prefect.

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Hey just because my name is KIGOsuperfan999 does not mean I like Kim and Shego being in love.Go RYGO *waves a flag around* fuck KIGO Kimberly is mine dammit!
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~wrybread Aug 20, 2009, 7:07:14 AM
I stress over rhyme
All the time.
I even talk to my friends that way.
It drives them crazy every day.
It must be a sickness. I sound like a nut.
Some even want to kick my butt.
And once I start I can’t seem to stop
I’ll keep doing it until I get tired and drop.
I promise I’ll stop and spare you the pain.
I’ll try not to do it if you write again.

Sorry--got carried away. Thank you.

--
"the Dr. James Timothy Possible of the K.P. Crew 2"

Hail the Lion of Judah & the Lion of Narnia
my brush is my pen
my pallette of colors are words
I wield them as best I can
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